The beak and the eyes let this down, as it looks more like a bird of prey with them. A triangular beak and a round eye would make this perfect.

The eye also does not look like it belongs on a canary, as it should be round. Making the beak triangular and the eye round would improve this a lot.

I'-) say that the 'W.H.U.F.C.' should either be incorporated more in the design (ie in a scroll) or dropped all together, as it is it looks like an afterthought.

I think the W.H.U.F.C. works well but needs to be centred. The middle of the third letter of five is not necessarily the midpoint.

Absolutely fantastic!

I like that you picked Japan to remake; I really dont like the one that they currently have - I think mostly because it just lacks any japanese feel to ...

I do agree Burkina Faso has a terrible crest and this is a big improvement to the present crest, but I wander why the red legs on the horse, ...

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I did read your description Mark and I am just pointing out here that you your self do borrow ideas from others. I think it is best that we continue ...

Very nice kits!!

I agree also, the away is very nice!!

Not bad. Not too big a fan of having the FCL and the Fussball club luzern on the crest. Very good use of the skyline.

Thank you on the feedback

Oops my bad, i didn't know that there is a purpose for the g-like shape in the middle.Thanks for the information

*da nos pennasGreat! With the coat of arms/old mk dons logo though you've given it a bit too much personality for red bull.