I actually think that the stripes work really well, and find it pleasing on the eye, I think what lets the design down is the flashes of white on the back of the shirt and also the shorts, iv never been a fan of over complicated shorts, possibly try moving the flashes on the front to the sides?

Other than that I think the front of the shirt is ace.

Yeah I think you're right, I quite like the flashes on the back of the shirt but the shorts was definitely just an after thought just to try and make them remotely fit with the shirt. I'-) put them to the side but I don't think this template really allows for me to show them like that.

Thanks for the compliment.

The shirt looks great, it is a nice idea for the strips. Therefore, I believe that this design would be better with teams like Banfield.