As always love your drawing style but there are a number of things I could change here.

- Make the eagle's head point the opposite way as if looking to Manchester, that's usually the meaning of the direction of eagle heads in heraldry.
- Add an eye for definition to face.
- Feathers (maybe) to the wings also for definition.
- Cut the number of pinstripes down so the sections match the amount of letters in the crest, with the C sitting in the centre two pinstripes and so on.
- Maybe change the Latin to the English 'Pride in Battle' could help to distinguish itself apart from Man City's logo.

Great logo, great tips from Curswine :cool:

I'-) change the Latin motto to "Superbia Novi Eboraci" myself - "Pride of New York" if Google translate know it's stuff.

I'-) change the Latin motto to "Superbia Novi Eboraci" myself - "Pride of New York" if Google translate know it's stuff.

Personally I would have the head of the eagle as you have dune here, I think it is better that way, and I wander a bit about the white part with the blue outline, the on that is be hind the shield where it says, "Superbia Novi Eboraci" the one in the background, is it part of this shield where it says "Superbia Novi Eboraci" or not?, feels a bit out of place in my opinion. But other wise a weary good crest and well dune as usual.