I guess it looks a little generic, the diamond and eagle looks shoking between both of them, and I think would be hard to place on a real embroidered crest (to be honest ¬¬ the real one is not easiest... actually looks really hard to make like that)

I find your designs difficult to understand because they are so far removed from traditional football crests. For this reason I don't like them and it's difficult to give feedback on how to improve.

Maybe if you included a description as to how you've come up with the logos and what the inspiration and ideas behind them are, members on here would be able to understand where you're coming from a little better and be able to give more constructive feedback?