I think your presentation is just great, but your drawing technique lets you down a little bit in the kit itself, try and make the shapes a bit more realistic such as the collar, it does let it down a bit, also on the mannequin try to create a bit more perspective on the logo.

Yeah, I drew most of this hastily a couple of months ago. I'm getting to grips with a graphics tablet now, hopefully that'll improve it.

do they have a reanult logo in their crest ? awesome !