· 9 years ago
Yes, it is, actually. And thanks for the shoutout,
but like most people here, I'm not trying to be insulting and demeaning but to offer feedback and help you become better - I've done so before, and you know that. I hope I've never crossed the line.
If any of my criticism is a bit too harsh, don't take it too seriously.
This design looks better because the typography is more modern and clear, and the geometry actually makes sense. So well done on improving on your first draft!
but like most people here, I'm not trying to be insulting and demeaning but to offer feedback and help you become better - I've done so before, and you know that. I hope I've never crossed the line.
If any of my criticism is a bit too harsh, don't take it too seriously.
This design looks better because the typography is more modern and clear, and the geometry actually makes sense. So well done on improving on your first draft!
