Both are quite weird...Fjmh's is really all over the place while Moom's breaks out of tradition, but that's unfortunately a big no...even if it looks nicer.
Moom's kit looks awesome! However, I think the lack of stripes would make Atletico fans really really mad, so it doesn't quite work for the team. If you just added a single stripe on the bottom of the kit similar to the one near the collar, this would work flawlessly.
Moom, just out of interest. Your presentation is absolutely fantastic, as always, but are the colours supposed to be this desaturated? For me, bright, radiating colours are part of the kit fun, to put it bluntly. ;-)