· 1 years ago
Sorry, but it is not working for me , and it is not how the logo should be done...
Seems , as you went right to the computer without any inspiration and , most
importantly , sketches . You have a great opportunity here to create a nice, cool
logo , by the way . Here , what hit me at a first glance was a NFL football in green , and
then that light grey on top of that make the whole thing look to a coin purse .So, please ,
go back to a proper creative process , meaning - ton of sketches , as many as you will need .
The jersey looks good .