I think it's a good start drawing on the Tower Power logo, i think the arrow on the tower sticks out like a sore thumb though, the great thing about the original is how well it blended in. I also think this suffers in kind of the same way Donnypool's logo does with the large amount of white space that's left empty

You could say that the arrow links in with the 'progress', but you can forsee what would happen if they are relegated, i.e. lots of joke badges on the back of the Sun with the arrow poiting down etc.

problem is you cant fill all the white space, think it need some or ends up looking too busy. wasnt sure about the arrow bit but wanted to include it cos of the 'tower power' logo. Thought that it might work with a more detailed tower. could maybe have the tower outline simplified so it looks better with the arrow