That's harsh man, it's some of his first tries, he needs more encouragement than anything, also if you're going to make such bad comments at least don't do it quite so anonymously.
I think it's refreshing to see someone new not using FM templates and trying to do it in there own unique way.
all your logos are nicely cut and resized which is rare to see from someone new, just need to try working on the shape of your kits and not make it quite so blocky.