I like how you've placed the Vélez logo just inside the V, works well. Not a fan of that collar and maybe you could show how the V ends on the back of the shirt, looks a little incomplete in that sense.
Its pretty hard to show how it ends, I forgot to mention on the blog that the chevron was sewn on over the shoulder panels if this shirt was made in real life and the crest sewn on top of that, like on a retro shirt. The collar is based on the one from the shirt that Velez won their first title in. I grew up with that sort of collar, and I wanted to focus the attention on the V, and so I used the V collar.