God, how many colours are you using for a kit!

not as many as I would like!

Far too much going on, enough here to make several kits, if you reduced it down a bit I think it could be great looking.

curswine, how do you think I should tweak it then? gimme a hint!

the errea logo and 7 on front of the shirt don't work where they are!!

:no:

I happen to disagree, thanks a bunch for the insightful bit of constructive criticism though!

I was sarcastically addressing the above "Guest" poster's "statement" of course.

to mouch happening in that shirt....
all the detailes are good .....but to many in the same shirt.......
a good shirt is a simple shirt with a good detaill or two......sometimes and often...less is more.....you really can try so moutch that yo kill the design.....
so think....less is somtimes more.....one good deatail........is better tehn 4 bad ones..........
pleas dont misunderstand the mail....i really love your design/drawings........but you/me can really try to mouck.........
smile.....keep on the good work..becourse...you are on the road...and getting there...it is a long road....been there done that,,,....therfore i know what i am talking about mate..
but still... i really like your designes....so keep on the good work......

i just making a shirt for port vale....
i will post it..put it on here...then you can see a plain shirt can be ok........please remember the work....less is more ( sometimes...not always )