Maybe a little over the top, but the design itself is a great one, and a unique drawing style as well is always welcome.

The different sleeve lengths are just to show how the kit would work as a long and short sleeve models which is a cool idea for me.

The different line types used as mesh make this a very unique looking kit too, but I am in agreement with MW that the how the flag is presented looks a bit weird.

Great drawing and presentation, but the shirt has way too much going on, and the one sleeve longer than the other makes it look weird. The flag detail i am also not a fan of