I like this one a lot !!! Love how the crest is done , the garment pattern is spot on! I do not believe that you need any amount of white on the concept, as you already have two contasting colours. Hope that you will win with this one.

thanks for the positive comment. There is a lot of time for designers to put in winning kits. I am guilty of liking to put in a third accent colour and or lines, it's kind of my thing.